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Письменная часть 13 вариант (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

№39

Sochi

Russia

30/03/2020

Dear Judy,

Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you again. Sorry, I haven't written sooner, I've been busy with my school studies.

I'll be glad to answer your questions. First of all, if I could choose any city of the world, I would move to New York, its busy atmosphere inspires me. Secondly, I think that many people move to big cities, because of great opportunities and wide variety of activities. For example many youngsters in Russia are dreaming to move to Moscow, but it's really hard, because of big competition and high prices for accommodation, food and transport.

By the way, it's cool that your brother got a job? What job has he got? What is his schedule? Did he like the boss?

Sorry, I have to do my homework now.

Drop me a line.

Best wishes,

Masha

№40.1

The circus is the best entertainment for children

Animal exploitation is one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Animals are used by people for zoos and circuses. The circus is widely known entertainment which provides an astonishing shows either for children or adults. Nonetheless, some people consider that circus is not a source of happiness, it is a cruel business, and its performances are definitely not for kids.

Personally, I think that our society should get rid of circuses. At first, circuses use animals to attract the audience and make money. People keep their main workers in terrifying conditions, making animals perform the tricks by beating and keeping in hunger. We should not teach children cruelty. Secondly, noisy shows can be scary, harmful for the immature mentality.

However, many people believe that going to a circus is a good way to spend time with children. They claim that children watch interesting behavior of animals, learn something new about them there.

I do not agree with this opinion. Circus performances can be really harmful. Children can learn about animals via Internet which is safer and cruelty free. In addition, parks, amusement parks and playground might be better entertainment for children.

To sum up, I think circuses are the relic of the past. we do not need them anymore.

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