Let me show you this table. It gives information about how different vehicles used to get to work are.
As can be seen from the percentage bar chart, the largest percentage of a means for getting to work is a motor vehicle. It is connected with such a reason that automobiles are extremely spread among adults. However, bicycles are not so popular and fast and people using them during way to work consist only 2%.
From the statistics it can be inferred that there is not a big difference between the frequency of usage such approaches to get to work corresponding to the middle of the table. Such modes as walk and going by car represent the average value and differ from one another only by 1%.
I want to say that there is a problem that can arise with getting to work or school. I suppose that, using cars, there is a big possibility to get not on time. There can be such problems as breaking down and traffic jams, which are really frequented in dig cities. To solve this problem I would suggest using cycles more and developing special equipped path for cyclists around the region.
All in all, I want to say that there is a variety of the ways of getting to work and everyone can find the most convenient for herself of himself.
Public transport 12%
Walk 6%
Car 7%
Cycling 2%
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an opening statem ent on the subject of the project work;
- select and report 2–3 main features:
-make 1-2 comparisons where relevant;
- outline a problem that can arise with getting to work or school and suggest the way of solving it:
- draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion on the ways of getting to work
К1– 2 балла
В работе раскрыты почти все аспекты, но есть неточности:
– в первом абзаце должна раскрываться проблема, по крайней мере должно даваться о ней небольшое представление. Здесь одно предложение, и суть проблемы не раскрывается. – не указано само число, желательно его добавлять для конкретики.Сравнения есть: «From the statistics it can be inferred that there is not a big difference between the frequency of usage such approaches to get to work corresponding to the middle of the table. Such modes as walk and going by car represent the average value and differ from one another only by 1%».
Решение достойное, раскрыто и вписано логично.
– вывод неплохой, но здесь нужно выразить именно свое мнение по поводу проблемы, не просто перефразировать ее.К2– 3 балла
Текст неплохо организован, разбит на абзацы. Средства связи активно используются, повествование последовательно.
К3 – 3 балла
Неправильно употребленное слово: usage – using
К4– 2 балла
Лишний артикль: of the ways
Неправильно написанное слово: special – specially
Неправильное число: path
Неправильный артикль: of himself
К5– 1 балл
Пропущена запятая: the statistics it can
Лишняя запятая: suppose that, using cars
Итого: 11 баллов