Счастливого нового года от критики24.ру критика24.ру
Верный помощник!

РЕГИСТРАЦИЯ
  вход

Вход через VK
забыли пароль?

Проверка сочинений
Заказать сочинение




Computers cannot replace teachers (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

11 из 14
Оценка эксперта внизу

There is a popular opinion that technological devices cannot work instead of professionals of an educational field. At the same time, some people claim that it is possible because there are lots of advantages computerized systems. Now I want to express my point of view on this issue.

I strongly believe that computers cannot substitute teachers. First of all, the psychological aspect is very important for an educational process. It means that only a teacher can see and take measures if a student is ill or worried. Secondly, studying at school is more effective way because teachers adapt to one’s individual needs and explain material again in detail.

However, my opponents think that people can be easily replaced by the computerized systems.

In their view, nowadays most people comfortable to study from home that is why a computer is a good helper in studying.

Personally, I do not agree with the above-mentioned opinion. I am convinced that this option is not for everyone because people are without control and they can waste their time using networks. A tutor can teach people a discipline and to be organized what are necessary for children’s future.

In conclusion, I would like to stress that it is impossible to substitute teachers with advanced machines because a social interaction and individual approach are needed for educational activity.

Обновлено:
Опубликовал(а):
Оценка эксперта:

К1 - содержание.

К2 - организация.

К3 - лексика.

instead of professionals of an educational field.(очень сложно. можно заменить. educational professionals)

people are without control(some people cannot control themselves)

К4 - грамматика.

advantages computerized systems(advantages of)

nowadays most people comfortable to study from home (it is comfortable to study from home for many people)

can teach people a discipline and to be organized what are necessary for children’s future.(просто organize smth)

can teach people a discipline and to be organized what are necessary for children’s future.(придаточное. which is necessary...)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

К1-3

К2-3

К3-2

К4-1

К5-2

Наши эксперты могут проверить Ваше сочинение по критериям ЕГЭ
ОТПРАВИТЬ НА ПРОВЕРКУ

Эксперты сайта Критика24.ру
Учителя ведущих школ и действующие эксперты Министерства просвещения Российской Федерации.


Внимание!
Если Вы заметили ошибку или опечатку, выделите текст и нажмите Ctrl+Enter.
Тем самым окажете неоценимую пользу проекту и другим читателям.

Спасибо за внимание.

.