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Books will be ousted by computers in the future (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)


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There is a popular opinion that books will disappear within some years because of developing new technologies. At the same time, some people claim that it is impossible because paper books are more convenient in using for society. Now I want to express my point on this issue.

I strongly believe that computers will take the upper hand over the books in the future. First of all, paper books are quite heavy to carry with you; especially for students that is why a person will have an electronic device for his or her needs soon. Secondly, if a person needs information about something, it is faster to find it with the help of a computer than go to a library what is time-consuming for people.

However, my opponents are sure that traditional books will exist forever. In their view, it is a high likelihood to harm person’s eyesight by using computers and all electronic devices that is why the most people will read only paper books.

Personally, I do not agree with the above-mentioned opinion.

I am convinced that electronic gadgets will be better quality and will not lead to health problems. On the contrary, these devices will not only to save people’s eyesight, but also cure the defects of vision in the future.

In conclusion, I would like to stress that books will be out of use in the nearest future because all electronic devices have lots of advantages for society including light weight and opportunities to improve person’s vision.

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К1 - содержание.

К2 - организация. Эссе построено логически верно.

К3 - лексика.

defects of vision (Vision плохо подходит, лучше eyesight)

К4 - грамматика.

it is a high likelihood(there is)

gadgets will be better quality(will have...)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

especially for students that is why(запятая перед that)

К1-3

К2-3

К3-3

К4-2

К5-1

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