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Задания 39 и 40. Some parents think that having a computer at home will help their children to get a better education (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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39. Moscow

Russia

23.05.2020

Dear Nick,

Thank you for your recent letters. I’m glad to receive your letter again. Sorry, I didn’t write you because I was very busy with my exams.

You asked me some questions about souvenirs and I’m ready to answer them. I think that nice souvenirs should reflect the culture and traditions of the country from which you brought them.

For example, you can bring matryoshkas from Russia. In my opinion, people buy souvenirs because they want to remember their trips. In general, I don’t buy souvenirs that I don’t like.

As I know, you have finished your translation. I’m very happy for you! How many pages does the translation contain? What language have you translated from? Was it difficult for you?

Sorry, my mum asks me to help my brother with his homework.

Keep in touch.

Best wishes,

Natalia

40. Some parents think that having a computer at home will help their children to get a better education.

There is a controversial topic. Sime parents think that their children can get a better education, if they have a computer. But at the same time, others believe that a computer cannot help their children in getting an education.

I hold the view that having a computer can help to get a good education. Firstly, there are a lot of different courses and webinars on the Internet where children can get new knowledge. Secondly, they can find additional information about some school subjects using a computer.

Despite that, there is an opposite point of view. My opponents insist that computers do not help their children to get a good education. For example, they think that most of young people use a computer only for playing computer games, but not for studying. Therefore, they just waste their time using a computer.

I am afraid, I can deny this argument. A child will not study in general, if he or she is not interested in it. But in the case, a child wants to study, he or she will use a computer for it and it helps them to get a good education.

To sum up, I want to say that although there are different points on this topic, I think that computers can help children to get a good education.

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К1 - содержание.

Ответы на 2 и 3 вопросы не распространены.

К2 - организация.

К3 - языковое оформление.

traditions of the country from which you brought them(which you brought them from).

К1 - 1

К2 - 2

К3 - 2. /5

Задание 40.

К1 - содержание.

Аргументы не достаточно распространены.

К2 - организация.

К3 - лексика.

К4 - грамматика.

he or she will use a computer for it and it helps them to get a good education. 2 разных времени в одном предложении.

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

Simeопечатка - Some.

get a better education, if they have a computer.не нужна запятая

playing computer games, but not for studying.не нужна запятая

A child will not study in general, if he or she не нужна запятая

К1-2

К2-3

К3-3

К4-3

К5-1

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