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Traveling helps to understand your own country (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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It goes without saying that travelling is one of the most important issues facing us today. So, many people claim that if you travel abroad, it may assist to realise your own country. Some people think that travelling does not aid to understand your state.

Personally, I believe that travelling does not help to make out your state. Firstly, in order to know about your country, you should learn about history, culture, geography, customs of your nation. For example, using some sources of information such as Internet, TV, books or newspapers. Secondly, it is essential to visit all regions of the country first before going somewhere else. For instance, the more places you visit inside your state, the better you understand it.

However, there are those who consider that travelling is a solution for realising your nation because it is a possibility to communicate with representatives of other countries.

For example, a traveller can see the differences in the state compared to their ones in the process of communication. It may help to broaden our outlook.

Nevertheless, I can not agree with opponents because there may not be enough information for comparison. As a result, the comparison of states may be superficial.

To sum up, I would like to emphasise that travelling abroad does not help to realise your own country because it is necessary to get a knowledge about your nation. So, it can assist to get a better understanding of the country.

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К1 - содержание.

Аспект 4 - опровержение не полностью отражает контраргументы.

К2 - организация. Балл может быть снижен за логику из-за ошибки в К1.

К3 - лексика.

because it is a possibility(лучше there is a possibility)

a traveller can see the differences in the state compared to their ones in the process of communication.(сложно понять предложение..)

К4 - грамматика.

such as Internet(The Internet)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

...customs of your nation. For example, using some sources...(По смыслу for example не является хорошей связью двух предложений. Лучше объединить в одно предложение)

В целом:

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К4-3

К5-2

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