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39. Message from your English-speaking pen-friend Ed. Subject: Leisure time / 40.2 Project on what teenagers in Zetland use social networks for (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

39. Hello Ed,

Thanks for your email. It`s great to hear from you again.

In your message you asked me some questions. Well, my attitude to gardening is neutral. Let people do what they like. I like to weave bracelets. This calms me down, but my mom thinks about my hobby that it`s a waste time.

You also wrote about the school photography contest.

When will the it take place? Where will it take place? And what is the name of this event?

That`s all for now. Sorry, I need to do my homework.

Keep in touch.

Best wishes,

*имя*

40. 2. Imagine that you are doing a project on what teenagers in Zetland use social networks for. You have found some data on the subject - the results of the opinion polls. Comment on the data in the diagram and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

Teenagers spend most of their time on mobile devices. I have done work for my important project to understand why teenagers in Zetland use social media. I have found some useful statistics for my project in the form of a diagram, to help give my opinion on the subject.

The information in the diagram shows the popularity of each possible activity. While listening to music is the most popular, writing a blog is the least. Chatting with friends ranks just below listening to music and roughly a third either choose finding the interesting information or watching films.

The diagram shows the difference between the different activities that teenagers in Zetland choose to do. The data also show that listening to music is more popular than writing a blog by a huge margin, having 52% popularity rating, against one of only 4%. Chatting with friends barely eclipses listening to music, which 23% of popularity express a preference for.

The statistics point to an underlying problem. Teenagers can realize themselves through blogging.

ut as we can see, blogging has a small percentage of popularity. To solve this problem, you can conduct special courses on blogging.

In conclusion, I would like to say that I hope that young people will be more interested in self-realization. This will help them a lot in the future.

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