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You have received an email message from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom / Imagine that you are doing a project on how teenagers in Zetland spend their free time (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Dear Tom,

I hope this email finds you well. Thank you for your message. In response to your question about young people in

ussia wanting to become independent from their parents, I think it is a common desire among young adults worldwide to want to gain independence and establish their own lives. However, in

ussia, it is not as common for young people to leave their families immediately after finishing school. It is more common for them to stay at home while attending university or working to save money for their own place.

egarding your trip to Scotland, I am curious about your experiences there. What were some of your favorite places that you visited? Did you try any traditional Scottish dishes? How was the weather during your stay?

Thank you again for your message.

I look forward to hearing back from you soon.

est regards,

Max

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The topic of our projects is how teenagers in Zetland spend their free time. The data from the opinion poll shows that hanging out with friends is the most popular activity, with 47% of teenagers engaging in this activity. Watching movies follows with 20%, while doing online shopping and cooking have 16% and 12% of teenage participants respectively. Only 5% of teenagers reported reading the same book and discussing it.

It is interesting to note the high percentage of teenagers spending their free time with friends, indicating the importance of socialization in their lives. However, there is a potential problem with excessive screen time, as evidenced by the high percentage of teenagers engaging in watching movies and online shopping.

To solve this problem, teenagers can be encouraged to engage in more offline activities, such as sports, volunteering, or creative hobbies. Parents and educators can also promote the importance of taking breaks from technology and spending time outdoors or with friends and family.

In my opinion, the best way of spending free time is by engaging in a variety of activities, both online and offline. While socialization is important, it is also crucial for teenagers to engage in activities that promote their physical and mental health, such as exercise, reading, or creative pursuits. It is important for teenagers to find a balance between socializing and self-care, in order to lead a fulfilling and healthy life.

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