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Dear Ted,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to read your messages.
In your email you asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. I think it's not really difficult to start, especially if you have a goal. I believe that you need to be physically fit to play tennis. This game requires you to be strong and healthy. In my opinion, three trainings a week are enough to have good progress.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions about your trip. How many days did you spend there? Did you go there with your family? Did you stay at hotel?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
Письмо 2-
Dear Jane,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to read your messages.
You asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. Personally, I do many special things to stay healthy. I ride a bike, eat many vegetables and spend enough time outside. In my opinion, sports and active lifestyle make people strong and healthy. I think that it is not easy to keep a healthy lifestyle, because many people don't have enough time to do sports every day. But this is important for everyone!
By the way, I want to ask you some questions. Does your sister have a physical disease? Is her diagnosis dangerous? Will she go to hospital?
I have to go now. It's time for doing homework. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
Письмо 3-
Dear Mary,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to read your messages.
You asked me some questions about issues with parents. Well, I'm going to answer them. Personally, I don't have any issues with my dad and mom. Certainly, I get on well with my relatives. We always respect each other. My mom is really kind and sincere,she supports me all the time.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions. What colour is your hair? Is your hair long or short? Is your hair curly?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
All the best,
Nastia
Письмо 4-
Dear Mia,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to get messages from you.
In your email you asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. To my mind, the most pressing environmental problems in Russia are water pollution and deforestation. Certainly, I participate in community clean-ups. I am eco-friendly, because I want to save our planet for young generations.
By the way, I'm going to ask you some questions about your new pet. Is your pet young or old? Is it big or small? Is it an exotic pet?
I have to go now. It's time for doing my homework.
All the best,
Nastia
... As you know I'm not really into sports, but our new PE teacher insists that every teenager should take up a sport and he wants a progress report on a regular basis. I've thought for a while, looked through the list of activities in the nearest sports centre and decided I could go for tennis. Do you think it's difficult to start? Do you need to be physically fit to play tennis? How many trainings a week are enough to have good progress?
By the way, last weekend we went to a ski resort...
Write an email to Ted.
In your message:
- answer her questions
- ask 3 questions about his trip to ski resort
Текст для письма 2 -
Summer is coming and I want to look my best: healthy, energetic and physically fit. So I'm trying to eat plain, simply cooked natural food, have enough sleep at night and I have recently joined our local fitness club. Do you do anything special to stay healthy? What makes people healthy and strong? What do you think about a healthy lifestyle?
By the way, my sister Jane had an appointment with a doctor and now she has to keep the bed ...
Write an email to Jane.
In your message:
- answer her questions
- ask 3 questions about her sister's disease.
Текст для письма 3-
...I've been asked to help my dad to clean the garage this weekend. But it will take us ages to make it clean and I have to sit for Maths test on Monday. I hate it when my parents do it to me. They don't understand me at all! What about you? Do you have any issues with your dad and mom? Do you get on well with your relatives? Does your mom support you all the time?
For other news. I've just dyed my hair...
Write a letter to Mary.
In your message:
- answer her questions;
- ask 3 questions about her hair.
Текст для письма 4-
...I had an amazing summer in the countryside! Rural living seems to have benefits. I can really tell the difference in the air quality. What environmental problems are the most pressing ones in Russia? Do you participate in community clean-ups? Are you eco-friendly?
...We're thinking of having one more pet...
Write an email to Mia
- answer her questions
- ask 3 questions about her new pet.
Write 100 — 140 words.
Remember the rules of email writing.
Пропущен артикль: Did you stay at a hotel? (либо at the hotel, если о конкретном отеле).
Одна ошибка: пропущен артикль в Did you stay at hotel (нужно at a hotel / at the hotel).
Пропущен артикль: sports and an active lifestyle.
to keep a healthy lifestyle, because many people don't have enough time
Запятая перед because не нужна: придаточное причины выполняет ограничительную функцию. Заодно точнее lead a healthy lifestyle.
It's time for doing homework.
Идиоматичнее It's time to do my homework.
Две негрубые ошибки: пропущен артикль в sports and active lifestyle (нужно an active lifestyle); лишняя запятая перед because в a healthy lifestyle, because many people (придаточное причины здесь не отделяется).
Comma splice: два независимых предложения соединены запятой. Нужно My mom is really kind and sincere. She supports me all the time (или ... and she supports me). Пропущенный пробел после запятой - опечатка набора.
Одна ошибка: My mom is really kind and sincere,she supports me - две самостоятельные грамматические основы соединены запятой (comma splice); нужно либо точка, либо союз and.
Питомца ещё нет - Мия только думает его завести (We're thinking of having one more pet). Вопросы нужно задавать о планах: What pet are you going to get? Will it be big or small? Would you like an exotic pet?
Три вопроса Мии раскрыты полно (актуальные экопроблемы России; участие в субботниках; экологичность). Но встречные вопросы о питомце не соответствуют коммуникативной ситуации: Мия пишет We're thinking of having one more pet - питомца ещё НЕТ, семья только думает его завести, а вопросы заданы в Present Simple о уже существующем животном (Is your pet young or old?). Корректно было бы спросить о планах: What pet are you going to get? Will it be big or small? Аспект «3 вопроса о новом питомце» выполнен с неточностью.
После этой фразы сразу идёт подпись - отсутствует ссылка на будущие контакты (Write back soon!).
Структура в целом выдержана, но отсутствует ссылка на будущие контакты (Write back soon! / Hope to hear from you soon) - в остальных трёх письмах она есть, а здесь после I have to go now сразу идёт подпись. Одно нарушение структуры.
Запятая перед because не нужна; for young generations - нужно for future generations («будущие поколения»).
Две негрубые ошибки: for young generations - нужно for future generations (сохранить планету для будущих, а не «молодых» поколений); лишняя запятая перед because в I am eco-friendly, because I want.