Dear Charlie,
Thank you for writing to me! I'm always glad to read your messages.
In your email message you asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. Yes, my family often goes on picnics. Certainly, I enjoy them so much! I think that picnics make our family close. Honestly, we have the same weather problems as you do in England. We live in the north of Russia and our weather changes really rapidly.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions about the band competition. How many bands took part in the competition? What were the names of the bands? What songs did participants sing?
I have to go now, because it's time for my favourite film about Harry Potter. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
Dear Adam,
Thanks for your message! I'm really happy to hear from you.
In your email message you asked me some questions about films. Let me answer them. Personally, I enjoy going to the cinema because I like to watch films on wide screen. I go to the cinena quite often: about two or three times a week. Usually I go there with my parents or close friends. Most of all, I like to watch comedies or war films because they are gripping!
By the way, I want to ask you some questions about the swimming lessons. When have you started taking them? Do you go to school for swimming? Do you pay for your lessons?
I have to go now. It's time for watching a show. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
Dear Tom,
Thanks for writing to me! I'm always glad to hear from you.
In your email message you asked me some questions. Let me answer them. In my opinion, it's really important to record family history. I think that children or teenagers should do it. They need to know about their parents and grandparents. To my mind, the best way to record family history is creating a family album with photos.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions about your mom. How old is she? What day is her birthday? What gifts does she like?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
2 weeks ago we went out into the countryside for a family picnic. It rained cats and dogs but we had a great time. Does your family go on picnics? Do you enjoy them? I imagine you probably have the same weather problems as we do in England?
I have some great news!! Our school band won Silver in the state "Battle of the Bands" contest. Awesome!...
Текст задания для второго письма-
Last week I went to the cinema with my friends. Do you like going to the cinema and why? How often do you go to the cinema and who do you go with? What kinds of films do you like to watch in the cinema?
By the way, I have started taking swimming lessons...
Опечатка: cinema.
on wide screen
Пропущен артикль: on a wide screen / on the big screen.
When have you started taking them?
Вопрос о конкретном моменте прошлого требует Past Simple: When did you start taking them?
In your email message
Лёгкая избыточность (email уже и есть message). Достаточно In your email / In your message. На балл не влияет.
Письма 1 и 3 практически безупречны. Во втором письме (Adam) — три ошибки: опечатка cinena (cinema); пропуск артикля в on a wide screen; Present Perfect вместо Past Simple в When have you started taking them (нужно When did you start).