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«адани€ 39 и 40. Life in the countryside is not for young people (—очинени€ ≈√Ё английский €зык)

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39. Moscow

Russia

09.06.2020

Dear Sophie,

Thank you for your recent letters. IТm glad to receive your letter again. Sorry, I didnТt write you because I was very busy with my exams.

You asked me interesting questions and IТm ready to answer them. Our teachers take us on trips to different museums, theatres, and so on.

We go on trips twice a school year approximately. As for me, I think that the most memorable trip was when we went to the chocolate factory because it was fun and amazing. We tried the chocolate, chocolate candy. They were delicious.

IТm very happy for you that your parrot learned to say ЂGood morning!ї. How old is your parrot? What is its name? How does it look like?

Sorry, my mum asks me to help my brother with his homework.

Keep in touch.

Best wishes,

Natalia

40. There is a controversial topic. Some people think that it is difficult to youngsters to live in the countryside. But at the same time, others believe that young people can live there.

I hold the view that the countryside is not for young people. Firstly, there are not any cinemas, theatres, restaurants in rural areas. Therefore, youngsters cannot have fun. It is very boring for them to live there. Secondly, there are not any universities, colleges in the countryside. Youngsters cannot get a good education and a well-paid job there.

Despite that, there is an opposite point of view. My opponents insist that it is better for young people to live in rural areas. For example, they can eat only organic food, drink unpolluted water and breath clean air in the countryside. Therefore, youngsters will be healthy.

I am afraid, I can deny this argument. There are a lot of shops that offer organic food in cities. Also, city residents can have access to high-quality healthcare.

To sum up, I want to say that although there are different points of view on this topic, I think that living in the countryside is not for young people.

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it was fun and amazing(funny)

We tried the chocolate, chocolate candy.(candy or candies?)

40.

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 2 - организаци€./3

 3 - лексика./2

there are not any cinemas(there are no ...)

not any universities(there are no ...)

 4 - грамматика./3

 5 - орфографи€ и пунктуаци€.1

But at the same time(лучше не начинать предложение с but, а объединить в одно)

breath clean air(breathe)

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