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Printed textbooks will be eventually replaced by electronic ones (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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There is a popular opinion that electronic books can change paper books in some time.Others consider that printed books will never disappear.Now I would like to express my point of view.

I strongly believe that with the technological progress books,made of paper,will be replaced by devices.Firstly, some technologies are better to use because they help people save the place.For example, when a person travels it is rather comfortable for him or her to get only one technology in a suitcase instead of many books. Secondly, electronic books let the person save money.People can buy a device once and just download thousands of free materials for a long time.

However, my opponents claim that using electronic books harms the vision. When people have paper in their hands,they see everything clear and have no problems with light contrast, influencing on eyes.

In spite of this convincing argument, I am sure that the invention of electronic books is unbelievable because it is made of special materials, protecting and even treating eyes.Nowadays technologies have everything for saving or improving health.

In conclusion, I would like to say that people will never stop reading but the way of reading will be changed.I am sure that in some time there will be no printed books.There will be electronic ones as they are more comfortable to use.

Оценка эксперта:

К1 - содержание.

К2 - организация.Эссе построено логически верно.

К3 - лексика

electronic books can change paper books(не change, а substitute)

save the place.(space)

get only one technology(device)

that using electronic books harms the vision(eyesight)

К4 - грамматика

that using electronic books harms the vision(the using of ...)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация

books,made of paper,will be replaced (Запятые не нужны)






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