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A teacher should always be strict (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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A teacher is a very difficult job. Many people tend to think that all teachers should be kind and cheerful, but others do not agree claiming that being a teacher means to be strict and even austere.

Personally, I consider that a perfect teacher is a person who can give you information in a positive and interesting way. To begin with, students do not love usually strict teachers and because of it they start to hate doing homework well, answer at the lessons and so on. Moreover, a strict teacher cannot attract students to study anything. However, if a teacher is kind and understands student’s problems, students will notice it and most of them will realize that the subject is useful.

However, some people suppose that every teacher should be strict. Firstly, only strict teachers can make a discipline in a class.

Secondly, students can be afraid of austere teachers. It helps them to be always responsible when they at the lesson.

Nevertheless, I do not agree with them because I think, if a teacher is kind, it will not mean that students will be irresponsible and misbehave. For example, it the film, called ‘Freedom writers’, a teacher is kind and all students listen to her. What is more, being afraid of a teacher is the worst thing because students will not ask questions to a teacher; know something new from him or her.

To some up, though there are two points of view on strict teachers, I truly believe that a teacher should not be strict, he or she need to be sensitive and kind.

Оценка эксперта:

К1 - содержание.

К2 - организация. Эссе построено логически верно.

К3 - лексика.

study anything.(learn)

know something new(learn)

A teacher is a very difficult jobprofession

К4 - грамматика.

students do not love usually(students usually do not like...)

It helps them to be always responsible (it helps them always be responsible....)

when they at the lesson.(they ARE)

if a teacher is kind, it will not mean (по смыслу лучше использовать 0 conditional, а не 1)

he or she need (needs)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация

because I think, if a teacher (запятая не нужна, лучше заменить словом that)

the film, called ‘Freedom writers’, a (запятые не нужны)

it the film(in)






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