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Traditional school textbooks should be replaced by e-books. What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement? (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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There is a popular opinion that e-books should replace conventional schoolbooks. Some people believe that traditional school textbooks can be replaced by e-books. Others do not agree with this opinion. Now I would like to express my point of view on this issue.

As for me, I think that electronic books should replace schoolbooks. Firstly, people cut down many trees to make a paper for books.

It is harmful to ecology. Therefore, replacing traditional books with electronic books people care about nature and teach this to students. Secondly, e-books are more comfortable than traditional schoolbooks, because everyone can take them with them to school. Electronic books multifunctional and compact.

However, some people have the different opinion. They consider that school textbooks cannot be replaced by e-books because they can deteriorate vision. Also, changing will be very expensive. Not every student can afford to buy an electronic book.

I cannot support this point of view because if you follow particular rules, you your vision will not change. Moreover, school can buy all e-books. Therefore, it is possible to replace textbooks with electronic books.

In conclusion, I would like to state that traditional school textbooks should be replaced by e-books.Electronic books have many advantages, so they can easily replace traditional schoolbooks.

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К1 - содержание.

К2 - организация.

К3 - лексика.

нет достаточной лексики, очень часто встречается повтор слов.

than traditional schoolbooks, because everyone can take them with them to school (тавтология)

deteriorate vision (eyesight)

К4 - грамматика.Встречаются грамматические ошибки. Например:

Electronic books multifunctional and compact.(books ARE)

you your vision will not change.??

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

than traditional schoolbooks, because everyone can take them with them to school (не нужна запятая)

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