Nowadays there are a lot of entertainments for children. Some people believe that the circus is the best one and others disagree with them.
In my opinion, the circus is not the best entertainment for children. Firstly, we must teach children to take care of animals, and in circuses, animals suffer from conditions of detention and training. And for this reason, we must not sponsor this business. Secondly, there are plenty of more beneficial entertainments such as cinema, board games, amusement parks.
However, some people think that the circus is the best entertainment for children. To prove their opinion they say that children love animals and want to see them in real life. They also claim that children are in delight of clowns, and they can find this kind of fun in the circus.
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Nevertheless, I cannot agree with the opposite opinion. I am convinced that if your child loves animals, he will not be happy to know that these animals are suffering. For example, you can go to the zoo and see the animals there. Or if you can afford, you can visit a national park with your child and watch the animals in their natural habitat. And if your child likes clowns so much, you can order it at home for a few hours.
To sum up, I would like to say that despite the availability and attractiveness of circuses, you should choose other entertainment for your children, thus educating them to love animals.
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