Is it right to be strict with little children? Пример (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Parenting is the hardest process for many people. Some of them claim that kids should be growing up in a strict way, while others have an opposite point of view.

In my opinion, little children must be raised in a family where discipline and strict methods are ones of the most important aspects of upbringing. Firstly, these children will quickly become independent and mature earlier than others. It helps them in real life where they will have responsibilities which should be performed accurately. Secondly, he or she will face fewer problems in the future because parents have already told and shown them what might happen if children would act as they want and what consequences could be.

Nevertheless, there are those who think that this way is harmful to kids and cannot be acceptable because a child will become reserved and shy.

Therefore, a family has to surround little children with kindness and care.

Despite this, I disagree. If parents encourage their child all the time, their kid turns into a selfish person who has no idea what punctuality, independence and responsibility are. He or she will not be able to adapt to new conditions of life in the future.

In conclusion, even though there is a view that parents should not be strict with their kids, I strongly believe that this is one of the most effective ways to let a child become a strong person who can control their life without additional problems.