University education is essential for young people; Future profession (Ñî÷èíåíèÿ ÅÃÝ àíãëèéñêèé ÿçûê)

Çàäàíèå 39 – 5 áàëëîâ

Ê1 (ðåøåíèå êîììóíèêàòèâíîé çàäà÷è) – 2 áàëëà

Ïîñòàâëåííàÿ êîììóíèêàòèâíàÿ çàäà÷à ðåøåíà â ïîëíîé ìåðå.

Ê2 (îðãàíèçàöèÿ òåêñòà) – 2 áàëëà

Îðãàíèçàöèÿ òåêñòà ñîîòâåòñòâóåò âñåì îñíîâíûì òðåáîâàíèÿì.

Ê3 (ÿçûêîâîå îôîðìëåíèå òåêñòà) – 1 áàëë

1) I have already decided on my career in the eighth grade [Íåêîððåêòíî èñïîëüçîâàíà ôîðìà âðåìåíè – ïîñêîëüêó èìååòñÿ óêàçàíèå íà òî÷íûé ìîìåíò ñîâåðøåíèÿ äåéñòâèÿ, ñëåäóåò çàìåíèòü have decided (Present Perfect) íà decided (Past Simple)];

2) I like study-process and explain difficult topics easier [Èç-çà íåñêîëüêî ñóìáóðíîé ãðàììàòè÷åñêîé îðãàíèçàöèè íå äî êîíöà ÿñåí ñìûñë ïðåäëîæåíèÿ. Ìîæíî ïðåäëîæèòü òàêîé âàðèàíò ïåðåôðàçèðîâàíèÿ: I enjoy the teaching process and like to explain difficult topics in a simple way];

3) What country you want to visit at first? [Íàðóøåíà ñòðóêòóðà âîïðîñèòåëüíîãî ïðåäëîæåíèÿ. Íåêîððåêòíî èñïîëüçîâàíî âûðàæåíèå at first. Âàðèàíò èñïðàâëåíèÿ: What country do you want to visit first?];

4) Why you don’t want travel through the USA? [Íàðóøåíà ñòðóêòóðà âîïðîñèòåëüíîãî ïðåäëîæåíèÿ. Ïðîïóùåíà ÷àñòèöà to ïîñëå ãëàãîëà want. Âàðèàíò èñïðàâëåíèÿ: Why don't you want to travel through/in the USA?].

Çàäàíèå 40 – 8 áàëëîâ

Ê1 (ðåøåíèå êîììóíèêàòèâíîé çàäà÷è) – 3 áàëëà

Òåìà ðàñêðûòà ñ ñîáëþäåíèåì âñåõ êëþ÷åâûõ òðåáîâàíèé.

Ê2 (îðãàíèçàöèÿ òåêñòà) – 3 áàëëà

Òåêñò âûñòðîåí ëîãè÷íî è õîðîøî ñòðóêòóðèðîâàí.

Ê3 (ëåêñèêà) – 0 áàëëîâ

1) in the Internet – on the Internet [Òðåáóåòñÿ èñïîëüçîâàíèå ïðåäëîãà on];

2) difficulties with their specialization – difficulties connected/associated with their specialization [Áåç óòî÷íåíèÿ ôðàãìåíò âûãëÿäèò íåïîëíûì è íåÿñíûì];

3) repeat difficult topics – revise difficult topics [Ñëîâî repeat ïîäðàçóìåâàåò ìåõàíè÷åñêîå âîñïðîèçâåäåíèå ðàíåå ñêàçàííîãî/íàïèñàííîãî, à íå ïîâòîðåíèå ó÷åáíîãî ìàòåðèàëà];

4) degreed from the university – graduated from university [Ñëîâî degree íå èñïîëüçóåòñÿ â äàííîì çíà÷åíèè è íå âûñòóïàåò êàê ãëàãîë];

5) then buy online courses – than buy online courses;

6) plan of education fits only self-discipline students – plan of education is suitable for self-disciplined students only.

Ê4 (ãðàììàòèêà) – 0 áàëëîâ

1) it is necessary to attend university and get classical education for teenagers – it is necessary for teenagers to attend university and get classical education [Íåîáõîäèìî ïåðåñòðîèòü êîíñòðóêöèþ];

2) university degree is still important – a university degree is still important [Òðåáóåòñÿ àðòèêëü];

3) find new friend – find new friends;

4) who will inspire to do their best – who will inspire them to do their best [Íåîáõîäèìî äîïîëíåíèå];

5) offers hard schedule – offers a hard schedule [Òðåáóåòñÿ àðòèêëü];

6) so it is no time for useless thing and lying in the bed – so there is no time for useless things and lying in bed [Êîíñòðóêöèÿ there is. Ìíîæåñòâåííîå ÷èñëî things. Óñòîé÷èâà ôðàçà lying in bed];

7) there are many new professions which are not taught in the university or study-program is too old – there are many new professions which are not taught at university and a lot of out-of-date programmes [Ôðàçà at university. Ïåðåôðàçèðîâàíèå êîíöà ïðåäëîæåíèÿ];

8) offers flexible schedule – offers a flexible schedule [Òðåáóåòñÿ àðòèêëü];

9) students do not stressed – students do not get stressed [Ïðîïóùåí ëåêñèêî-ãðàììàòè÷åñêèé ýëåìåíò get];

10) students who degreed from the university have diploma and can easily find good job – students who graduated from university have diplomas and can easily find a good job [Ñëîâî university áåç àðòèêëÿ. Diplomas âî ìíîæåñòâåííîì ÷èñëå. Àðòèêëü ïåðåä ñëîâîì job];

11) flexible plan – a flexible plan [Òðåáóåòñÿ àðòèêëü].

Ê5 (îðôîãðàôèÿ è ïóíêòóàöèÿ) – 2 áàëëà

Ñåðü¸çíûå íåäî÷¸òû îòñóòñòâóþò.