Nowadays social media sites are popular all over the world, especially among teenagers. My project, which I am still working on, is aimed to analyze what social media sites are the most popular.
I have found some information in the Internet and now I am going to analyze it and express my opinion. The chart shows several features. The first feature is that 42% of teenagers use Facebook. YouTube is the second place: 23% of teenagers use it. And the least popular social network is Telegram.
It is also worth mentioning that difference between WhatsApp and TikTok is 10%. It is obvious that most people use WhatsApp, because TikTok created only for entertainment and not for communicating with friends and parents.
In my opinion, social media sites take a lot of time from teenagers. They spend less time talking face-to-face and it is a problem. To solve it, we should try to meet more often offline, to see emotions and understand each other better.
To sum up my reasoning, I would like to say that social networks are very convenient and they save our time, but equally important is communication in reality.
Comment on the data in the diagram and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
What social media sites are popular with teenagers in Zetland
Facebook 42%
YouTube 23%
WhatsApp 21%
TikTok 11%
Telegram 3%
Write 200−250 words.
Use the following plan:
— make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
— select and report 2−3 facts;
— make 1−2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
— outline a problem that one can face using social media sites and suggest a way of solving it;
— conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of social media for teenagers.
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К5. Орфографические ошибки практически отсутствуют. Текст разделён на предложения с правильным пунктуационным оформлением. В тексте имеется 1 орфографическая ошибка. (2 из 2)