There is no doubt that watching TV is an essential part of everyday life and it is the main way to find out about news. As part of my project, I have found some data and a table, illustrating the part of day when people watch TV. The aim of my project is to analyze the information.
Now I would like to report the main facts from the table. Firstly, most people watch TV in the evening (43%) and in the night (37%). Secondly, the afternoon (9%) appears to be the least popular time.
However, it is worth mentioning that the difference between the percentage of people who watch TV in the evening (43%) and in the night (37%) is small, only 6 per cent. At the same time, the afternoon (9%) is approximately as popular as the morning (11%).
One problem that can arise with part of the day when people watch TV is that person who prefers doing it at night will probably have problems with a dream. As the table shows, watching TV at night is the most popular. It leads to sleep disturbance, a headache and a bad mood. The best way of solving this problem is to replace watching TV with reading books. It can help relax and prepare for sleep.
In conclusion, I believe that TV became imprescriptible thing in everybody's life, but I prefer to communicate with my friends or listen to music than watching TV. To some extent, TV can have a bad effect on people.
Part of the day. Number of people (%)
Morning 11
Afternoon 9
Evening 43
Night 37
Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan:
- make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
- select and report 2-3 main features; - make 1-2 comparisons where relevant;
- outline a problem that can arise with watching TV and suggest the way of solving it;
- draw a conclusion giving your personal opinion of the role of TV in human life.
К1 – 3 балла
To some extent, TV can have a bad effect on people. – если указываете такую проблему, то нужно ее пояснить, если оставите так, то это будет некорректно с точки зрения организации текста и раскрытия проблемы.
К2 – 3 балла
Есть вступительные предложения с проблемой и обозначения, что вы готовите проект, нашли к нему материалы – все это правильно. Указание фактов и их сравнение верны. Текст организован верно, есть основные данные и пояснения к ним.
К3 – 3 балла
have problems with a dream – лексическая ошибка, a dream ≠ sleeping, если вы пишите про dreams, то проблема возникает именно со сновидениями, а не со сном как таковым.
К4 – 2 балла
Отсутствует нужный артикль: news, day, imprescriptible
The aim of my project is – не будет ошибкой так написать, но лучше перефразировать: My project aims to
and in the night (37%) – at the night (37%) (повторяется)
per cent – percent
К5 – 2 балла
It leads to sleep disturbance, a headache and a bad mood. – пропущена запятая
Итог: 12 баллов