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Письмо другу. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Peter who writes (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Izhevsk

Russia

06/06/2020

Dear Peter,

Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you again. We haven`t been in touch for so long.

You have asked me several questions. Well, reading is so significant to me because it`s improves my speech, I learn something new and interesting, also I can share my new knowledge with friends. I spend my leisure time watching TV shows and reading novels.

My parents always support me, any interests or hobbies.

By the way, you wrote about your father’s birthday. What gift did you give your father? Where did you celebrate? Did father spend his birthday with family or friends?

Sorry, I`ve got to help my mother. Write back soon,

Best wishes,

Masha

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Where did you celebrate? Did father spend his birthday with family or friends?(логическая несочетаемость вопросов)

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it`s improves(it improves)

My parents always support me, any interests or hobbies.(support in interests ...)

I`ve got to help my mother(I have to help / I need to help...)

Write back soon,(должна стоять точка)

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