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Organized travel is not as interesting as independent travel example (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Nowadays travelling is a very popular pastime. Many people tend to think that travelling which is planned by a company or someone is absorbing, but others do not agree claiming that adventures which are made yourselves are the best.

Personally, I consider that organized travel is more engaging that independent one. Firstly, people will know about the best sights in advance. They cannot miss main places of interest in a new country because everything is in their list. Secondly, independent travel does not include motels, cafes, special tours. People need to find everything themselves. It can be a problem for people who are the beginners in travelling.

However, some people suppose that independent travel is more interesting and exciting because it does not make people go in the certain direction.

Tourists can arrive in different places and walk around a city alone. What is more, people who have organized travel use only a particular list of sights which they need to visit. They will not go to other places.

Nevertheless, I do not agree with them because sometimes going in the certain direction is the best way of travelling. People can see a lot of amazing sights and know more about culture. Moreover, organized travel does not mean travelling in a group. And finally, people can always add some new places in their trip list.

To sum up, though there are two points of view on organized or independent travel, I think that organized adventure is easier and more interesting than independent travel.

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К1 - содержание. Хорошо подобраны аргументы, контраргументы, опровержение.

К2 - организация. Эссе построено логически верно.

К3 - лексика. Частое употребление слова travel. Грубых лексических ошибок нет.

К4 - грамматика.

engaging that independent one(than)

are made yourselves(are made by yourself)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация. Грубых ошибок нет.

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