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Bad weather can ruin all your holiday plans (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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There is a popular opinion that unpleasant weather conditions are the main cause of changing plans for a vacation. At the same time, some people claim that it is not the important aspect of varying the goals for relaxing because this problem can be resolved. Now I want to express my point of view on this issue.

I strongly believe that bad weather can change people’s plans for holiday. First of all, it is impossible to move if the weather conditions are awful. For instance, planes cannot fly because of strong wind and poor visibility that is why people have to cancel their trips. Secondly, many people depend on the weather. It means that the atmospheric conditions, including heavy rain and air pressure can spoil the person’s mood or cause a headache that leads to altering holiday plans.

However, my opponents consider that bad weather cannot ruin the plans for a vacation.

In their view, people can know the weather forecast in advance to avoid unexpected consequences.

Personally, I do not agree with the above-mentioned opinion. I am convinced that the weather is unpredictable and it is impossible to foresee the atmospheric condition on a certain day.

In conclusion, I would like to stress that it is a high likelihood of changing holiday plans by the adverse weather conditions because it is dangerous to go and impacts on wellbeing of a person.

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К1 - содержание. отличные аргументы, контраргумент, опровержение.

К2 - организация. Эссе построено логически верно.

К3 - лексика. Грубых лексических ошибок нет.

poor visibility that is why people (несвязное предложение.)

К4 - грамматика.Грубых грамматических ошибок нет.

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

poor visibility that is why people (запятая переь that, разделяет грамматические основы)

В целом:

К1-3

К2-3

К3-3

К4-3

К5-2


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