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Studying online is more interesting than at school пример (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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There are people who consider learning subjects online more exciting than at school, whereas others say that getting an education at school is the best way to get an excellent knowledge.

In my opinion, it is more effectively and entertaining to study at school. Firstly, being in school give us an opportunity to talk with classmates. It is always more interesting to discuss some educational problems with schoolmates in real life. Secondly, the traditional way of studying provides more effective and productive results in the very end.

However, there exists another point of view on this issue. Some people consider ,that classmates very often distract each other from studying. If she or he is absorbed in studying online they cannot be distracted or bored. Another fact is that online school is a step into the future. Increasingly, schools are turning to this format of education, because it is available to all students, and the Internet has a lot of necessary and useful information.

Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because children need to be raised and educated by adults.

This is why parents send their children to school. Moreover, one should not ignore the fact that rural areas are limited in online schools due to the lack of necessary equipment.

Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I would like to emphasize that even nowadays traditional educational system remains the most used and reliable, and it has in total a way more advantages than the electronic one.

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format of education, because it is available






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