In our modern world making money is one of the most significant skills so some people believe all teenagers should have a part-time job while others do not agree.
In my opinion, it is a good idea that all youth should have a part-time job. To begin with, having a job is an opportunity to prepare for the future adulthood and to feel yourself independent. Besides, a part-time job brings some money so schoolchildren can afford to buy more things. Finally, working teenagers spend their free time usefully when a lot of young people just surf the Net and watch TV.
However, not all people share my point of view and there are few people who believe it is wrong when adolescents work because having a job can have a negative effect on a student’s academic performance. Moreover, they are convinced that a teen’s job may worsen relationships with family and friends.
Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot agree with this. Firstly, a part-time job usually takes up only for 3-4 hours a day taking into account the existence of days off so students who work can find the time for their homework.
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Secondly, teens can work with their friends or relatives so it brings them together.
In conclusion I would like to say that a part-time job teaches young people how to become a responsible and successful person.
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