Moscow
Russia
01/01/2018
Dear Molly,
I was happy to receive your letter and learn about your babysitting experience.
In your letter you asked me about my attitude towards babysitting. Well, I have two little cousins, and my relatives often ask me to look after them. I like to spend time with the cousins very much. We play different games such as hide-and-seek and catch-up, watch movies and walk. I agree that sometimes babysitting can be quite tough, but in most cases I enjoy it. You know, I'm the only child in the family and I'd like to have a sister because sometimes I really need that type of support that only she can give to me.
That’s exciting news about your trip to your cousin! How old is he now? What are his hobbies? Does he remember me?
That’s all for now as I must do my homework. Write back soon.
Bye,
Liza
К1 (решение коммуникативной задачи) – 2 балла
Коммуникативная задача успешно решена. Однако желательно более чётко обозначить отсылку к предыдущим контактам. К примеру, можно добавить в соответствующее предложение слово again: I was happy to receive your letter again and learn about your babysitting experience.
К2 (организация текста) – 2 балла
Организация текста соответствует актуальным требованиям.
К3 (языковое оформление текста) – 2 балла
1) catch-up – tag [По всей видимости, имеется в виду игра в догонялки. В этом случае лучше использовать существительное tag];
2) support that only she can give to me – support that only she can give me [Предлог to не требуется].