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Dear Edward,
Thanks for writing to me! I'm always glad to read your messages.
Let me answer your questions. Certainly, I can help you with your project. I think that different nations have different hobbies. For example, Englishmen enjoy fishing and spending time near the sea. Actually, Russians like to knit and cook. Members of our family have many amazing hobbies. My mum enjoys collecting stamps and old postcards. My elder sister does aerobics and plays tennis.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions. Were your exams easy or difficult? Were your exams oral? How many tasks were in your exams?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
All the best,
Nastia
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Dear Nicole,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to read your messages.
In your email you asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. Actually, school means very much to me. I believe that school is an amazing place. Certainly, I feel the same about it. I think that I will miss school. Personally, I am going to meet my school friends after I finish school.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions. What countries would you like to visit? Would you like to travel with your family? Would you like to travel by plane?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
All the best,
Nastia
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Dear Nora,
Thanks for writing to me. I'm always glad to read your messages.
In your email you asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. Personally, I have different kinds of dreams. For example, I wish I lived in Moscow. Besides, I want to have my own car. In my opinion, I need personal qualities like bravery and kindness to realise my wishes. I don't tell anyone about my dreams because I think that they are strange and stupid.
By the way, I want to ask you some questions. How old is your elder brother? What are his interests? Is he a student?
I have to go now. It's time to do my homework. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Nastia
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...I’m going to do a project on hobbies in different countries. Could you help me? Do you think that different nations have different hobbies? Can you give examples? What interesting hobbies do Russians have? What hobbies do members of your family have?
As for the latest news, I have just passed my last exam...
Write an email to Edward. In your message answer her questions, ask 3 questions about his exams. Write 100–140 words. Remember the rules of email writing. You have 20 minutes to do this task.
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...When I think about leaving school it is clear I'm going to miss my school friends, classes and teachers very much. They’re so important to me. We seem to be very friendly and enthusiastic about participating in all the school events. What does school mean to you? Do you feel the same about it? Do you think you will miss school? Are you going to meet your school friends after you finish school?
I have lived in London most of my life but I'd really love to travel to other countries...
Write an email to Nicole. In your message answer her questions, ask 3 questions about her plans for travelling. Write 100–140 words. Remember the rules of email writing. You have 20 minutes to do this task.
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... My mom says I have too many dreams. What kind of dreams do you have? What personal qualities do you need to realise your wishes? Do you tell anyone about your dreams, why yes or no?
Last weekend my elder brother went hiking …
Write a letter to Nora.
In your letter:
??— answer his questions;
??— ask 3 questions about her elder brother.
Прямой ответ на просьбу Could you help me - именно так и открывают основную часть письма.
Отвечены все четыре пункта письма Эдварда: просьба о помощи, различаются ли хобби у разных народов (с примером), хобби русских, хобби членов семьи. Заданы ровно три встречных вопроса, и все три - об экзаменах, как требовало задание. Объём основной части 116 слов при нормативе 100-140.
Связка не по значению: Actually вводит поправку вопреки ожиданию собеседника, а здесь простой переход к следующей стране. Естественнее: As for Russians, they like knitting and cooking.
Формат выдержан полностью: обращение, благодарность за письмо, основная часть, переход к своим вопросам, причина окончания, завершающая фраза, подпись. Абзацное членение есть. Единственное замечание - связка Actually перед переходом к русским хобби стоит не по значению; балл не снижаю, в неформальном письме такой маркер проходит.
our family - это семья вместе с адресатом, то есть Ваша с Эдвардом общая. Он спрашивал про Вашу семью. Нужно: Members of my family have many amazing hobbies.
Englishmen enjoy fishing
Englishmen - англичане мужского пола. Когда речь о народе в целом, нормативно the English или English people.
How many tasks were in your exams?
Конструкция допустима, но естественнее с формальным there: How many tasks were there in your exams?
Were your exams easy or difficult? Were your exams oral?
Три вопроса подряд с одним и тем же your exams. Второй легко облегчить: Were they oral?
Одна нормативная ошибка на 116 слов: our family вместо my family. По шкале 0-2 ошибки это 2 балла. Наблюдения без снятия балла: Englishmen вместо the English, отсутствие формального there в вопросе о количестве заданий, троекратный повтор your exams в трёх вопросах подряд.
Ответ дословно повторяет вопрос. Аспект формально закрыт, но ответ-эхо ничего не добавляет. Безопаснее: I feel the same - our class has become a real team.
Personally, I am going to meet my school friends after I finish school.
Полный ответ на последний вопрос, с сохранением конструкции самой Николь.
Николь задала четыре вопроса, и ответ есть на каждый: что школа значит для Вас, чувствуете ли Вы то же самое, будете ли скучать, будете ли встречаться с друзьями после школы. Три встречных вопроса - все о планах на путешествия. Объём 114 слов, в норме. Замечание без снятия балла: два ответа дословно повторяют формулировку вопроса.
Сочетание mean very much неидиоматично: норма school means a lot to me. И Actually здесь ничего не корректирует - это первый ответ в письме.
Нормативных ошибок нет. Единственное наблюдение - сочетание mean very much неидиоматично, норма means a lot to me; на балл не влияет.
Вопрос был why yes or no - причина названа прямо. Именно этого и ждут от третьего аспекта.
In my opinion, I need personal qualities like bravery and kindness to realise my wishes.
Ответ точный. В письме другу like уместно; в нейтральном стиле было бы such as.
Самое сильное из трёх писем. Все три вопроса Норы отвечены с развёртыванием: мечты названы конкретно, качества перечислены, на вопрос why yes or no дана прямая причина. Три встречных вопроса - все о старшем брате. Объём 118 слов, в норме.
Конструкция I wish + Past Simple построена верно. На ЕГЭ это заметно выделяет работу - большинство пишет I wish I live.
Ошибок нет. Отдельно отмечу верно построенный I wish + Past Simple - на этом уровне встречается редко.