Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык

Письмо и эссе по английскому.

📅 04.07.2026
Автор: Ekspert
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Письмо 1-

Dear Tom,

Thanks for writing to me! I'm always glad to read your messages.

You asked me some questions. Well, I'm going to answer them. Honestly, we think that not relying on parents is a bit difficult. Independent living requires to be responsible. Frankly speaking, I'm not ready to leave my family immediately after finishing school Certainly, I'll miss my parents. As far as I think, it is easy to rent a house or an apartment for students in Russia, especially in big cities.

By the way I want to ask you about your trip to Scotland. What places did you visit? How long was your trip? Did you travel on your own?

I have to go now. It's time for doing my homework. Write back soon!

Best wishes,

Nastia

Письмо 2-

Dear Richard,

Thanks for writing to me! I'm always glad to read your messages.

You asked me some questions. I'm going to answer them. Personally, I like to hang out with friends in my free time. It's really fantastic! Usually I go to restaurants and parks with my friends on the weekend. I'm interested in reading history novels and watching films. Besides, playing chess is my hobby.

By the way, I want to ask you about your friend's visit. How old is your friend? What do you usually do together? Will you spend time outside?

I have to go now. It's time for doing my homework. Write back soon!

Best wishes,

Nastia

Эссе-проект, задание 38.

The project I am currently working on is aimed at establishing how people keep fit in Zetland. As part of my work, I have found a pie chart with some data. I am going to give my opinion on the subject of the project.

According to the pie chart, answering the question "How do people keep fit in Zetland?" the minority of the surveyed choose the option "Changing sleeping schedule" (11%), which is followed by the response "Becoming a vegetarian" (15%). The most common response is "Doing yoga"(42%).

As can be seen from the pie chart, the figure for the response "Doing yoga" (42%) is 27% higher than " Becoming a vegetarian" (15%). It can be explained by the fact that many respondents think that yoga makes great influence on physical and mental health. In the same time, vegetarian diets are not recommended for some people, especially for children who need to eat meat products.

Analysing the topic, I have outlined a problem that one can face keeping fit. It can worth much time and money. For example, yoga classes can be expensive and rather long. The best way of solving it is to plan one's day schedule and budget.

In conclusion, I believe that keeping fit is vitally important for everyone. It can help to be healthy and self-satisfied.

Исходный текст
Текст задания для письма 1-
...In Great Britain young people want to become independent from their parents as soon as possible. Could you tell me
what you and your friends think about not relying on your parents? Are you ready to leave your family immediately after you finish school? Is it easy to rent a house or an apartment for students in Russia?
As for the latest news, I have just returned from a trip to Scotland...
Текст задания для письма 2-
...I'm currently studying for my exams and hope to do well at my finals. I wish I could have more free time now as I love going out with my friends, meeting new people, making new acquaintances. Do you like hanging out with friends in your free time or are you a stay-at-home type? How do you usually spend the weekend? What are your hobbies or interests?

A friend of mine is coming to see me this weekend...
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Письмо 1 (задание 37) — ответ Тому: самостоятельность, аренда жилья
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I Содержание
К1Решение коммуникативной задачи
2 / 2
Решение коммуникативной задачи. Все три вопроса Тома раскрыты, заданы три встречных вопроса о Шотландии; формат и регистр выдержаны.
К2Организация текста
2 / 2
Организация текста. Полная структура письма, верное абзацное членение, уместные связки.
II Языковое оформление
К3Языковое оформление текста
1 / 2
Independent living requires to be responsible.
После require нужен герундий/объектная конструкция: requires being responsible / requires you to be responsible.
finishing school Certainly
Пропущена точка: ...finishing school. Certainly, I'll miss my parents.
By the way I want to ask you
После вводного оборота нужна запятая: By the way, I want to ask you.
Языковое оформление. Три негрубые ошибки: requires to be responsible (нужен герундий/объектная конструкция); пропущена точка (school. Certainly); пропущена запятая после By the way.
Задача решена полностью; правка — грамматика requires и две пунктуационные мелочи.
Письмо 2 (задание 37) — ответ Ричарду: досуг, хобби
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I Содержание
К1Решение коммуникативной задачи
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Решение коммуникативной задачи. Три вопроса раскрыты, заданы три встречных вопроса о визите друга.
К2Организация текста
2 / 2
Организация текста. Полная структура, связки на месте.
II Языковое оформление
К3Языковое оформление текста
2 / 2
reading history novels
Нужно прилагательное: historical novels (history — существительное).
Языковое оформление. Одна лексическая ошибка: history novels -> historical novels. В пределах высшего балла.
Практически безупречное письмо.
Эссе (задание 38) — проект «How do people keep fit in Zetland»
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I Содержание
К1Решение коммуникативной задачи
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I have found a pie chart with some data
Лучше конкретизировать источник: a pie chart showing some relevant data on how people keep fit.
Решение коммуникативной задачи. Все аспекты проекта раскрыты; снижение за расплывчатость вступления (some data) и за то, что Zetland упомянут только во вступлении.
К2Организация текста
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Организация текста. Чёткое пятиабзацное деление, уместные маркеры в начале каждого абзаца, логика выдержана.
II Языковое оформление
К3Лексика
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In the same time
Устойчивое выражение: At the same time.
makes great influence
С influence используется have: has a great influence on.
self-satisfied
self-satisfied = самодовольный (негативно). Нужно content / satisfied with life.
Лексика. Три ошибки: In the same time -> At the same time; makes great influence -> has a great influence; self-satisfied (самодовольный) -> content.
К4Грамматика
3 / 3
It can worth much time and money
worth — не глагол. Нужно: It can cost a lot of time and money.
Грамматика. Одна ошибка: It can worth -> It can cost / take up. Высший балл сохраняется.
К5Орфография и пунктуация
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Орфография и пунктуация. Орфография чистая, вариант языка выдержан; мелкая пунктуация в пределах нормы.
Сильное по структуре эссе с точной работой с данными; зона роста — лексическая точность.
Общий комментарий
Составная работа: два письма (задание 37) и эссе (задание 38). Итог 22 / 26.
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