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What fields are robots used in nowadays?

📅 18.03.2023
Автор: Ekspert

Nowadays, most of people use gadgets and robots for daily routine. Robots help us to create difficult details at factories. My progect, which i am still working on, is aimed to finding out what fields are robots used in nowadays.

I can identify two main features, presented in the table. How we can see, the most of robots (50%) are used in industry, which means that majority of modern robots work for creating different details in the factories, while tne minority of them (5%) are used in transportand vehicle.

It also worth mentioning, that robots using in medicine are more popular then robots, which are used in science with difference in 10 persent.

In my opinion, the main problem of robots in the modern life is reduction of work places in factories. The immence number of employee are fired, due to robots which make people. s job faster and better. The way of solving the problem is retraining of unemployed, because after this, every person can find new job.

In conclusion, robots are extremly usful for all of people, robots can extract heavy metals and keep houses clean. Owing to robots people do not need to take risk to mine uranium or build rockets.

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Imagine that you are doing a project on what fields robots are used in nowadays. You have found some data on the subject  — the results оf the opinion polls (see the pie chart below).

Comment on the data in the diagram and give your personal opinion on the subject of the project.



What fields are robots used in nowadays?



Write 200−250 words. Use the following plan:

— make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

— select and report 2−3 main facts;

— make 1−2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

— outline a problem that can arise with robots and suggest the way of solving it;

— draw a conclusion giving and explaining your personal opinion on the role of robots in human life.
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Owing to robots people do not need to take risk to mine uranium or build rockets.
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