Письмо
Dear Jane,
Thank you for your email. It is great to hear you again.
You asked me about your mom's anniversary on last weekend. I convey my congratulations! Let me answer your questions. I usually cook mashed potatoes and roast chiken for special occasions. It's our tradition! As for your last question, I really often entertain my family members. I come with up different contests. We normally celebrate family holidays at home because we like spending time together.
I'm glad to hear that your middle brother won schools tennis tournament. Is he happy? Was he preparing for it? Do your parents proud of their son?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Mary
Эссе
Nowadays teenagers choose different ways to spending their free time. My project, thing I am still working on, is aimed at finding how teenagers spend their free time in Zetland. I have found data on this issue and organised it in the table below.
According to the diagram, majority of the respondents enjoy hanging out with friends (47%). 20 % of them prefer watching movies. Doing online shopping and cooking are also quite popular (16% and 12%). Only 5 % of teenagers choose reading the same books and discussing it.
The data analysis reveals that number of respondents who like hanging out with friends is 9. 4 time more then number of teenagers who has chosen reading the books and discussing it. It is quite understandable because reading makes you think and hanging out with friends relaxes.
Although modern teenagers are quite active in spending their free time, they don't interested in reading and other ways to broadening their horizon so it seems to be a problem. To solve this problem modern authorities could raise the relevant questions for teenagers so writers could get closer with their audience.
In conclusion, I believe reading books and discussing it will be very popular in our future.
...Last weekend was my mom's anniversary and we had a family gathering. We entertained more than 25 people and lived on leftovers for 2 days after the event. What do you usually cook for special occasions? How often do you entertain people in your family? Do you normally celebrate your family holidays at home, or go to a cafe or to a club? Why? Oh, before Iforget, my middle brother won our school tennis tournament...
Write a letter to Jane.
Эссе
38.1 Imagine that you are doing a project on how teenagers in Zetland spend their free time. You have found some data on the subject — the results of the opinion polls (see the table below).
Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.
Activities Number of teenagers (%)
Hanging out with friends 47
Watching movies 20
Doing online shopping 16
Cooking 12
Reading the same book and discussing it 5
К1. Полное раскрытие всех аспектов, наличие точный развернутых ответов, употребление
норм вежливости, грамотный стиль изложения. (2 из 2)
К2. Соблюдение структуры и логики письма, правильное деление абзацев. (2 из 2)
К3. Соответствие лексики и грамматики уровню B1 и выше. Имеется одна орфографическая и одна грамматическая ошибка. (2 из 2)
on перед last не нужно.
Орфографическая ошибка.
К1. Решение коммуникативной задачи. Задание выполнено полностью: содержание отражает полно и точно все аспекты, указанные в задании; стилевое оформление речи выбрано правильно. (3 из 3)
К2. Организация текста. Высказывание логично, средства логической связи использованы правильно, структура текста соответствует предложенному плану, текст правильно разделён на абзацы. (3 из 3)
К3. Используемый словарный запас соответствует высокому уровню сложности задания, практически нет нарушений в использовании лексики. (3 из 3)
К4. Используемые грамматические средства не очень соответствуют высокому уровню сложности задания, в тексте имеется пять–семь грамматических ошибок. (1 из 3)
Неправильная форма глагола.
Пропущен определенный артикль.
Пропущен определенный артикль.
Грамматическая ошибка.
Неправильная форма глагола.
Неправильный предлог.
К5. Орфографические ошибки практически отсутствуют. Текст разделён на предложения с правильным пунктуационным оформлением. В тексте имеется 1 орфографическая ошибка. (2 из 2)
Перепутаны слова с похожим звучанием или написанием. Орфографическая ошибка.