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A person who is fluent in a foreign language can easily teach it пример эссе (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)


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Some people claim that those who have a perfect command of a foreign language can educate it other people without any troubles, others have an opposite point of view. Let us consider this problem more closely.

In my opinion, people who have an advanced level of a foreign language can easily share their knowledge. Firstly, people who speak a foreign language fluently can teach his students how to participate in daily conversations and express your thoughts and desires. Secondly, they can expand students’ vocabulary because they know plenty synonyms and expressions. Thirdly, people who a fluent in a foreign language can teach how to make sentences correctly and avoid grammar mistakes.

However, not all people share my point of view. They say that in order to teach a foreign language one should have a diploma of a teacher.

Moreover, they claim that not all people who have a perfect command of a foreign language can express their thoughts correctly.

I am afraid, I can not agree with the above mentioned statement, as a diploma of a teacher is just a piece of paper so it can not show the knowledge of a language and the ability to teach it correctly. Furthermore, people who educate a language use special books and materials where students can find all essential information so educators are needed only to correct mistakes in pronunciation and accuracy of using different words.

Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I am convinced that everybody who knows a language perfectly can share his knowledge and educate people.

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К1 - содержание.

express your thoughts (нарушение стиля. В эссе лучше не использовать you/your)

Аспект 5 - заключение. Не распространено. (+/-)

К2 - организация. Эссе постреоно логически верно.

К3 - лексика.Грубых лексических ошибок нет.

К4 - грамматика./B]

people who speak a foreign language fluently can teach his students (people - his? (their))

people who a fluent(are)

К5 - орфография и пунктуация.

can not(cannot)

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К2-3

К3-3

К4-3

К5-2

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