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Задания 39 и 40 Only people who earn a lot of money are successful (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Dear Sam,

Thank you for your letter. It was great to hear from you again. I’m sorry I haven’t answered earlier but I was busy with my exams.

In your letter you asked me about the influence of computers in our life. Well, I believe that this invention let us do different kind of work very easy. I think that the people's opinion on computers is very different because of their character and personality. What about me, I have got a computer at home and I use it to prepare my school reports and find an interesting information.

By the way, tell me more about your holidays. Which country or city have you visited? How long have you been there? Did you travel alone or with someone?

Anyway, I have to go now, because I have lots of homework to do.

Write back soon!

Best wishes,


Only people who earn a lot of money are successful


One issue that has caused lots of controversy over the years is what the successful person is, and how his success depends on the salary he earns. I would like to express my opinion on this problem.

My personal view is that money is not the key to success. As I far as I am concerned, the most important thing is responsibility and aspiration to move on the career ladder. If you do not have the goal to strive for, you will not be able to succeed in the job you do. Also, I suppose that the labour which brings happiness and enjoyment to person is one of the main steps to improving your career. It assists to do your work properly and do not surrender in difficult times.

Nevertheless, some people believe that the more money person gets, the more successful he is. I think they suppose the wealthy person to buy a big number of things he wants. As there are people who had not enough salary paid, they want to earn more and believe that money is the most important part of their existence.

Personally, I cannot agree with this statement because money is not the most essential part of our life. Getting a new experience is a way important, because that is what our job is about.

I am strongly convinced that the success is not about money, it is about purposefulness and devotion to your own deed.

Оценка эксперта:

Задание 39.

G: different kind(kinds)

L: very easy(easily по смыслу)

What about me(As for me)

prepare my school reports(make a report)

Задание 39: 5

К1 - 2

К2 - 2

К3 - 1

Задание 40.

К3 - лексика.

Getting a new experience is a way important(??)

К4 - грамматика.

that the more money person gets, the more successful he is.(не нужно the)

Задание 40: 14

К1 - 3

К2 - 3

К3 - 3

К4 - 3

К5 - 2

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