Example In any occupation discipline is more important than talent (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)
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It goes without saying that people have different opinions about the importance of discipline. Some people strongly believe that those who are organized can become more successful in their chosen fields than those who are just talented. Others suppose that giftedness is the crucial thing in any profession.
From my point of view, in any occupation discipline is more essential than talent. Firstly, there are a lot of people who have talents but do nothing to develop them. These people cannot organize their time and find the right way to reach the success. Moreover, there are also many people who do not have much talents, but they are more successful because of their discipline. Secondly, the effective management is the most important thing every big corporation. Therefore, if there is no control in a group of talented employees, the business cannot be efficient.
However, other people believe that being talented is the most important thing in reaching the success, because if someone does not have an innate ability to some activity, he can never be good at this.
Moreover, It does not depend on their efforts, because those who are gifted have more opportunities to achieve the success in a shorter time.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with the opposing opinion as it is not enough to be gifted to have success in any occupation. It is also very important to work hard, be disciplined, set your own goals and be good at time-management. Only doing this even people who do not have talents can achieve more goals than those who are gifted.
Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I would like to emphasize that in any occupation talent is less important than discipline.