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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages. (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Some young people claim that high-school students shouldn’t combine studying at school with working part-time, whereas others believe that it may be acceptable.

To my way of thinking, it is undesirable for pupils juggling studying and working. They should concentrating on studying. Firstly, students can prepare for the exams at school which they take before graduation. They allow pupils to enter the university and then find a good job. It will be better than a part-time job which students do while studying at school. Secondly, if they have a job, they will have less free time to relax and therefore they may feel exhausted.

As a result, students can find themselves under stress, which can be harmful to their health and well-being.

However, some believe that combining working part-time and studying is more appropriate than just studying at school. A job enables people to get money. It may provide them with extra pocket money. Furthermore, it gives a chance to engage in something. There is no point in sitting at home.

Nevertheless, I disagree with this point of view. After working part-time students become tired and cannot concentrate on studying at school. Moreover, they cannot earn much money because this kind of work is not high-qualified. Pupils also need to have some time to relax at home.

Students cannot earn much money because this kind of work is not high-qualified. Moreover, this work experience would be unlikely useful to their future profession. It is most desirable to accumulate knowledge, which may be valuable afterward, during study at a university.

In conclusion, I can state that studying is much better than superposing part-time jobs with it. It gives a chance to pass exams to find a good profession and have time for studying.

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